The bird flew in the wind.

Hello World,

This is someone who lived most of her life differently then most people who are reading this. Here is her story:

Ella loved to look at herself in the mirror and she loved to make funny faces. Ella loved to read in her bed especially when read diary of the wimpy kid. Above all she loved to look up at the sky and wonder how it was like to be a bird and fly. What she did not like was the smell of the city or the medicine that the doctors gave to her. Ella was very pale and had barley no hair anymore but she still sang everyday with all her heart. She still laughed when people made jokes and she still dreamed of the things she would do. She was the smallest kid in her class yet she had the biggest and most beautiful soul.

One day she fell of the swing her favorite swing. At school they quickly contacted the hospital as she lost consciousness. While going to the hospital all she could dream off was going high in the air with the swing and back down and high again. She felt nothing but pure happiness as she was going high very high. When they finally got her to the Hospital and after a lot of stress the doctors got her to wake up. When she woke up she smiled at her mom standing over her and at her brother. She smiled to the doctors who looked like they had not slept for the last 24 hours. She said one thing before going back to sleep. “Thank You.”

Then the dream came back. This time she was not on a swing but on a bird and together they were flying. Up in the sky she went further and further. The farther she went the more she felt like she was the one flying and not the bird. She then looked down and saw that she had transformed into a bird. A beautiful one the type she always had wanted to be. She looked down one last time to see her family to say bye and before she knew it she had arrived somewhere in the clouds where there was light everywhere.

 

Note: This is an fictional character and here is the swing I had imagined while writing the story. Here are some stories that have a similar topic that are filled with sadness and beauty.   https://www.shortstories101.com/story/hospital-

http://thoughtcatalog.com/lorenzo-jensen-iii/2015/03/the-18-saddest-short-stories-youll-ever-read-and-theyre-only-two-sentences-each/

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10 Comments on The bird flew in the wind.

  1. Miss W.
    November 9, 2016 at 10:49 pm (6 years ago)

    Wow, Lucie,
    What a fantastic story and I love the fact you found an image to go with it and a couple of links to other places with similar stories. Well done!

    Reply
    • lucieisd20
      November 10, 2016 at 7:12 am (6 years ago)

      Dear Mrs W,
      Thank You Miss W for your kind words. I apreciate it!
      Lucie

      Reply
  2. Axel
    November 11, 2016 at 8:40 am (6 years ago)

    Very nice story!

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    • lucieisd20
      November 12, 2016 at 4:19 pm (6 years ago)

      Thank you

      Reply
  3. Olivia T
    November 16, 2016 at 5:44 am (6 years ago)

    Hi Lucie,

    My name’s Olivia and I come from Australia.

    I absolutely loved your story! It was a mixture of sadness and freedom.

    I loved the title as it immediately drew me in and the story was amazing.

    I loved how creative you were, and I hope you write another story in the future!

    Please visit my blog and leave a comment:http://oliviat6wildy.edublogs.org/

    Great Job!

    Olivia 🙂

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    • lucieisd20
      November 16, 2016 at 8:51 am (6 years ago)

      Hi Olivia,

      That is so cool to come from Australia.
      Thank you so much for these compliments you are so kind!
      Yes I will write another story in the future
      I will absolutely visit your blog!
      Thank You,
      Lucie

      Reply
  4. Olivia Tallent
    November 16, 2016 at 8:11 pm (6 years ago)

    Great!

    Thanks so much 🙂

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    • lucieisd20
      November 17, 2016 at 1:32 pm (6 years ago)

      No problem!

      Reply
  5. Thanumi
    November 18, 2016 at 11:00 am (6 years ago)

    Hello Lucie! I am Thanumi, a grade 6 student from Thailand.
    That was amazing! Your story was a nice combination of sadness and the happiness of freedom. You are a great writer! I was just wondering, is not it supposed to be ‘one day she fell off her favorite swing,’ instead of ‘one day she fell of the swing her favorite swing?’ By the way, will it be fine if I add you to my global friends list? Hope you will visit my blog soon! My link is, http://thanumiabey.weebly.com/

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    • lucieisd20
      November 18, 2016 at 11:37 am (6 years ago)

      Hello Thanumi,
      Thank you so much for the correction!
      I am in 9th grade and come from Belgium.
      Thank you for the compliments and of course you can add me to your global friends list.
      I will totally check your blog out.
      Lucie

      Reply

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